they are haveing fun there at the water they like the water they like the water and the sky they love where they live he love to silde in the wet i like being wet by livia.l
They are having fun.And their at the water park.Fun happy glad super happy.When babies go to the water park they start sceaming.Even when they slid they sceam like dogs barking.And to see the wolds places.
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Top of the World
So many places to see
So many miles to go
Ms. Mitchell
Jump into the world
without looking down
Enjoy the ride
Ms. Mitchell
Blue and green swirl
below me
Can't wait for the moment
Ms. Mitchell
fun laughs happy world in
a waterplanet! jump into the
water!,happy friendly times.tt.
theres a guy sliding down the slide and the water park is really big people are having fun.cameron
the man is on the slide
the man is having fun
the man is happy
andrew jimenez
BLUE AND GREEN SRIWL BELOW ME I WILL HAVE FUN THERE TOO.
J.A.M.
Having great times,
drinking a drink that swirls into
your tastebuds mouth! enjoy the
view!
they look like they are having fun at that wonderful place
mt
theer
was a gost. he thro rocks at cars. c.a.
when I get on a water slide I GIVE a push and start to glide ja.
I love those moments too! TT to
ms mitchell!
FAMLY COMES FRST JT
ANE THANG FORE FAMLY
MY FAMLY IS GOOD
LOVE MY FAMLY A LOT
YOU HAVE A GOOD FAMLE
that girl is haveing a lots of fun
shes sokeing wet
the sun is shineing bright
RH
T.T, You are a natural poet. Keep posting.
Ms. Mitchell
J.T. "Family first" is amazing. Great word choice!
Ms. Mitchell
A.J. Very to the point. Post more emotions.
Ms. Mitchell
they are haveing fun there at the water they like the water they like the water and the sky they love where they live he love to silde in the wet i like being wet by livia.l
that was a good one to jt
when you ride a waterslide it is very fun it takes about 14 seconds and you are done
BLUE AND GREEN SRIWL BELOW ME I WILL HAVE FUN THERE TOO.
J.A.M.
The view is joy! everyone deserves
joy,the view is like you can see the Earth. TT.
slitrbon it look like fun ithey it look like fun
They are having fun.And their at the water park.Fun happy glad super happy.When babies go to the water park they start sceaming.Even when they slid they sceam like dogs barking.And to see the wolds places.
I like yours liva
I LIKE EVERYONES POEM RM
L.L. I enjoyed this line " the sky they love."
Ms. Mitchell
A world with the happeist moment.
When its night the world
collides. TT.
Having fun at a watarpark playing and sliding in the water
in an nise hot day in the summer break. NG
I like your poems ms.michelle
T.T. "everyone deserves joy" is amazing.
Ms. Mitchell
good rimeing johonathon.
MS.MITCHELL I LIKE YOUR POEM RH
great poem Livia . NG
ms.mitchell your peom ryms and you made ryming.
ms.mitchell your peom ryms and you made ryming.
i love your poem tt it is intersin than by livia.l
i like it .tt Arianna
ms.mitchell your words rym and I like your peom.DL.
love the words Thanh great poem NG
I like your cameron
thank you ng love your friend livia.l
ms.mitchell polm is gret. allan. chigo
A plashe fun plase were you cant run but you can be in the sun and you can eat a hotdog in a bun and i
got a aun dun bun.
last won wos c.m.
I like yours ms.mitchell
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