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Friday, September 23, 2011

15 Words or Less Poetry

Write a 15 Words or Less Poetry. Make as many as you like. Respond to two other writers.

33 comments:

Anonymous said...

Eye to eye people stare
and relax.peace
asleep.waiting for the trip. TT.

Amitch said...

T.T. You have a way with words. You are great. Ms. Mitchell

Anonymous said...

eye too eye people just have too stare at the bus some relaxe








j.a.m

Anonymous said...

they are on a bus going to a wonderfle place








mt = max terry

Anonymous said...

they are going to a fild trip or it like they are going home or they drive them to school if they have school.livia.l

Anonymous said...

they are going on a fiedtrip hes standing up hes looking out or they are going home RH :)*_*

Anonymous said...

yours was good tt. from max terry

Anonymous said...

that is a good comment TT. and i like your comment to TT. and your are the best one ever TT.LIVIA.L

Anonymous said...

i like your poem T.T:)

Anonymous said...

they are having fun in the bus relaxeing while they are waiting for the trip.






j.a.m.

Anonymous said...

that a good commment rey and that is awsome

Anonymous said...

they are having fun in the bus relaxeing while they are waiting for the trip.






j.a.m.

Anonymous said...

People wait in till we get there.And we had a graet time there.And when we got there the show was very funny becaues when the moose hit the man with its akeriers.And the feild trip was fun
DL.

Anonymous said...

max your comment is awsome max.livia.l

Anonymous said...

im butiful im natrul im kind im divine im most butiful. JA.

Anonymous said...

ms.mitchell you wirte nice self ms.mitchell.livia.l

Anonymous said...

i like your poem tt your poem is the best








j.a.m.=jocelyn anaye martinez

Anonymous said...

i like your poem tt your poem is the best








j.a.m.=jocelyn anaye martinez

Anonymous said...

the boy is in the bus
the boy is on the chair
the boy is looking back



A.J.

Anonymous said...

i love all of your comment.livia.l

Anonymous said...

people wating for the trip.sitting in the seats so they can get to the place want to be at right now. thinking thoughts.cameron

Anonymous said...

I like yours camron
max

Anonymous said...

There are having fun in the bus.Me and jocelyn were playing tag on the chairs like i scoot back so she cant get me,DL

Anonymous said...

I LIKE YOUR T.T.T.T.T.T.





A.J.

Anonymous said...

i like your story :) from livia.l

Anonymous said...

I LIKE YOUR MS.M.


A.J

Anonymous said...

tt you rock you are the best reader and you are good at everthing







j.a.m.=jocelyn anaye martinez

Anonymous said...

TO JA I love how you write with
divine you are the class
president!

Anonymous said...

I LIKE YOUR J.A.M

Anonymous said...

bus are boring bus are fun

A.C.

Anonymous said...

I like your poem livia.ja

Anonymous said...

the sky is blue no clouds the sun is out and the kids are very exited forthe trip as we drive onthe road. c.t

Anonymous said...

bus a bus wot a prity bus it can
be prple are pink.it can be eneing.
a bunch of kids go to scool in the nite it i fite to you if you are naw but you can got out wine it is time to go!


love.
c.m.