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About Me
- Amitch
45 comments:
the 3 speacial places are waterpark
playground and my house.one day me and my brother wanted to go to the waterpark.we went to tell our mom she said yes so we went to go put are swimming suits on. we got their i learned to swim underwater i realy had fun there. my brothere can go undere watere to. cameron.
C.A. I love going to the waterpark. Feeling the sun cooking my skin to a bronze tan makes me happy. Splashing around in the Wave Pool with my family is one of the greatest joys in my life. I personally love to jump into a tube a drift slowly down the Lazy River with my toes dangling in the cool water. Amazing topic. Thank you for sharing. Ms. Mitchell
onetime me and my family went to the beach we had fun. we made a sand castle and went to the water .I saw a big blue jellyfish . i was digging in the sand with my shovel.i made anthoure sand castle. cameron.
Jt. my dad went to his frads howse and my dad,s frand was saling littel puppes and my dad went to a bank and got some mony and my dad went back to his freand,s howse a gen and got the littel puppes a then my dad went home and suprisd us.
one day I went to play with my kasind to play call of duty black ops and I was going to leaf and my mom said we can staen here for a little bete and said ok mom
ch. onec me and my brother build a fort so me we ken sleep in we stay up all night we got to play cutyblackcops we playd nazie zombie it was so fun we let are dog and are mom they wer all ready a sleep they woke up in the morning me and brother wer tirer are mom woke up with are dog
J.T. You got puppies! Can you tell us how it made you feel? Bubbles in your tummy? Joy in your heart? I know that when I got my cat Shelly I was so excited I wanted to cry with joy. She was a little fuzzle of terror. She was biting and jumping on all of the other sleeping kittens. I knew she was the one for me. Ms. Mitchell
C.H. I love making forts with blankets in my living room. We crawl around making rooms. Sometimes we even take naps and have snacks in there. Good topic. Can you describe what the fort looks like? Ms. Mitchell
When I met with Mercedes in 2nd grade I was lonely and it was time for recess and I couldn,t find a friend to play with so then
Mercedes came and she was lonely too she said do you want to play I said yes I intruduced my self then she intruduced her self we played a lot even when when we got angry to this day I always play play with her and she does too we have a lot in common were both considerate to each other and we both like icecream and we like hoscotch this is how I met with Mercedes. NG
my mom is speacial beacause sometimes she takes me to the movies. my brothere is special beacuse he plays with me. my grandma is special beacuse she helps me with stuff. my grandpa is special beacuse hes nice to me. cameron.
Jt. cameron i like yous
cameron your store is good
ANDREW
One day i went to go to the beach.I went swimming.And i came in deep into the water.And it was still on my shoulder.And my little sisters want to come with me and my big sister.Andthen we came on a boat they have to take our too.It was great going around the ocean.When i went to pizza hut. Pizza hut is a great piace to be in they give snacks.And they have good snacks like brones and donots. And they sell good pizza in the world.It is so so good to eat .And my home is a place to be.My mom lets me do stuff i want.When i eat i clean up what i make in the kicthen.And i wash dishes for my mom .So she can relast.
N.G. I think your word choice is brilliant. "When I met with Mercedes in 2nd grade I was lonely ... " This is a great lead. You had me hooked into your story instantly. What a Writer!
I went to a new school called Buffalo Creek! I was so excited that I met new friends.I came over and introduce myself to stacy, she introduced her. we played and played so I told Stacy do you want to be bffs she agreed after I told her we had lots of memorys so lets make more! We went to the playground we played mom and dad, hide and seek, and plenty more! Our friendship was so great to us,we got great grades,awsome at spelling we also drew cool pictures! Our friendship made us better! A year later I moved,I was really sad.When it was my uncle birthday his friend sister was my best friend she also came! At the partywe played balloon tossing and we jumped round and round. But it was time for her to leave I got to stay. We never saw each other yet. My uncle went to the same school as her so he said Stacy was going to Austraila! AND NEVER COMING BACK! I was about to cry but I said to myself brace yourself you got new friends. It did not cheer me up but it was true. TT.
I love my mom she is a good person. she works very hard and has a lot of meetings most of the time she works for this thing called tmo. it is a thing that helps communitys with such things as killers,thifs and other stuff like that.my dad was an ellectrishion until he got un horrable axedent. it took him 5 months to recoufer.he almost died he coud not go home for a long time.it took him 6 weeks get out of the hospital.I was so glad atho he did have to be in a wheelchair for a few days.
Cameron your story is great I love going to the beach. N.G
the time i wint to disney i sall mikey and mini and donod and goofy and daisy woody mes.patatohead and i went to the prade and all the cher in the prade bot my favret cher was the lionking andit was fun i like it
my mom and dad and my borther and sister we went to cukce chese for my birthday and it was fun and my mom buy me cotten candy and it taste good and it was blue and i got a lot of tikeit and tthey were lot of game therethen we went home and open my persent and it was cool and i got a lot of persent and they take me to d&b and we ate pizza there and cickin wing and diffet food there and i play with my dad and my borther we play deal or no deal and we got lot of ticket.i went to star and the food ther and they were good.my sister let me play with her ipad if i be nice to her ever time.my cousin jenny she is my bestfriend and and my best cousinever even aelxisis very nice and kind and all my cousin are very nice.my aunt and uncel is is nice and kind and they are my faverite aunt and uncel ever on sunday i use a pearwere shot i vs my borther and my sister then we play shoting at the goal me and my little borther were goale it was very fun.on saterday i wacth two of my borther game and we were girl vs boy it was fun and we play with my cousin by livia.l
one time i went to the park with my grandparents and my brothere.me and my brothere played on the slides swings and the othere stuff. we played tag and hide and seek.cameron.
ch. thank you ms.mitchle
T.T. You were born a writer. I felt like I was meeting Stacy too. It was great when you wrote that your friendship was great. You had lots of emotion in your story. Ms. Mitchell
I like youre story jt.
TT I love your story its wonderful. NG
i love your sorty it was interness
i like your sore camrron frome;arianna
I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pizza hut and your story! to Devyani
L.L. Chuck E. Cheese is a great topic because there is so much to do there. The sprakling lights nad the booming music just fills the air with excitement. Ms.Mtichell
we went to are dad house we had fun went to the pool because it was so hot on Saturday we went to Ross,Kolhs and stay up for the hole night and have a slummber party on Sunday we went to the flee market it was so so much fun, i got to get on a horse and spinning wheel purple ride space ship ride and we got to ride a fake car and we went to the play room and took a picture with my favorite and then we put on are baby brother and then put 50 cents in the machine and it started going and we went back to the horses and all of us rode them agian. we got on the purple ride agian and we kept on rideing on it we went home we got are bags and he took us home
Jt.me and my dad wet to the gocarts weth my dad we stad ther for three hours plaing gams and riting the gocats a then me and my dad went home
LL your story is great
you have a really good story tt.
I love your details! ca
i love your sroty cameron by livia.l
My mom is special to me we like to cook we like to go to chukiecheese go to my grandmas house we like go to my couzins house sometimes i like to go there and then we play mother and dauther i play the little girl she plays the mother i liked that game and we like to prank people we like to dress up we like to do a lot of things we have a lot of fun sometimes we like to have sleep overs well i like to but it was a preety good summer i just don't like the heat sometimes because it's so hot in summer but i still like summer because it's a good time to reast from school sometimes but my most favrite season is winter my mom is excited abuot me writting this story.jp
One day for my birthday party we went to fast track. No won was their so we had to wate.Then my friends came but we still had to wate,wile we weir paying vido games.when more people came it wasn't evryone was not there but I said I want to go to the gocarts she said sure why not.But when we got outside THEIR WAS NO SUPER CARTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!but that was ok then for the rest of the day we weir racing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
one day we went to moody gardens it took a long time to get thier we saw three big parimids so we got in it was cold in there so i put on a jacket we saw animals every were there were monkeys and birds and there was a butterfly room i ran to the butterfly room some got on me next i got out and i saw birds right in front of me so i was silent then i saw MONKEYS!!!! I LOVE MONKEYS!! THEY ARE MY FOVRITE ANIMAL so i told my mom to take a pictrue of the monkey next i saw a croudile it looked scary next we got in a cave it was dark then i saw a red light i saw a bats sleeping and i a saw a spider it was harry it freaked me out i saw a snakes slitering around finaly we got out and it was raining and i said WhAt its raining next we went to a nother piarmid there were fish every were i saw a shark and i was like who i saw diffrent kind of fish we were trying to find a exit we finaly fond a exit next we went to RH
one day i toke my 3dogs to the park.me and my dogs were playing.then my dog my pit me.ac jt
the day i wente to the detist.
wonday i wite to the deist.
i wos skard but my frend wos with me.we sat ther for 3 awrs but then thay cold me omm i sed. i wete in thay lookt at my teeth. she thot i had kaodes as big as a o like this won o.it wos oreo coekes we lugh win thay were don i felt werd we laft.
love c.m.
And i went to mecico and i went to the beach in mecico.And the beach in mecico is cold.I mean the water was cold.And i saw jelly fish.
one day I weint to uota it was so fun thin we weint to terofalgu ferst we plad termunatr solvasun the vido game thin we playd laser tag wuns we wot in ther ther was a sete ther was a video that seed ther was 4 teems the tarunots v.s godin goerd v.s renugad foers v.s gereing terouots taerunots wera the bad gies but the taerunots wera the best werin I WAS THE TAERUNOTS WE WUD PORT1.AJL
one day I weint to uota it was so fun thin we weint to terofalgu ferst we plad termunatr solvasun the vido game thin we playd laser tag wuns we wot in ther ther was a sete ther was a video that seed ther was 4 teems the tarunots v.s godin goerd v.s renugad foers v.s gereing terouots taerunots wera the bad gies but the taerunots wera the best werin I WAS THE TAERUNOTS WE WUD PORT1.AJL
I have enjoyed reading your class blog. All of the many expereinces you all are writing about have brought back great memories. Keep writing.
ms.sanders thanks you ms.sanders.
andrew
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