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Friday, September 9, 2011

15 words or less Poetry Fridays

Try this picture for your poetry. Try to look deep in yourself for words this week. Now think even deeper. WOW me with your words, Class.

42 comments:

Amitch said...

happy flows within
Running, laughing, joy
Holding hands, holding life
Ms. Mitchell

Anonymous said...

happy family running to gether
holding hand with each aother
running threw flowers
RH

Amitch said...

R.H.
I just love your words like "running through the flowers."
Ms. Mitchell

Anonymous said...

the family are have fun
happy summer
hold hund

andrew jimenez

Amitch said...

A.J.
Great words like "happy summer."
Ms. Mitchell

Anonymous said...

RUNNING IS FUN
HOLDING HANDS

Anonymous said...

happy famly runying whith echother max terry

Amitch said...

M.T.
Very clear and to the point. Make another.
Ms. Mitchell

Anonymous said...

I LOVE YOUR POEM MS.Mitchell!!!=)

Anonymous said...

They are a happy family.And they are holding hands.They are laughing.with joy.And the mom is holding the little girls.There runny and laughing.

Anonymous said...

Family,beloved and joy.Laughing in the sunshine!Its the touch of the heart maybe love.TT.

Anonymous said...

happy,friendley,ecxieding,running, trustworthiness,lovefull,kind,nice,respect,caring, by livia.l

Anonymous said...

THE FAMILY ARE HAVING FUN AND HOLDING HANDS







J.M.

Anonymous said...

happy always flows within when spining in wind. JA

Anonymous said...

I like yours rey
mt

Anonymous said...

I love the desribing, rey!

Anonymous said...

outside is fun inside is not fun.

Anonymous said...

i love all of your poem by livia.l

Anonymous said...

M.M
I like your ms.mitchell

andrew jimenez

Anonymous said...

great poem tt i like the words you put into the poem cameron.

Amitch said...

Happy family
But a shadow on the ground
What does that mean?
Ms. Mitchell

Anonymous said...

your poem is terfect ms.mitchell by livia.l

Anonymous said...

careing family
loveing family
running in the grate sun

Anonymous said...

I think your poem is like cupid and sidekick in love. to Ms Mitchell!

Anonymous said...

A Mitch do you like aJ

Anonymous said...

I LIKE YOUR COMMENT TT

Anonymous said...

your peom is garet rey and wonderful rey by livia.l

Anonymous said...

I Luve my mom and dad wenevr im sad thay make me glad I luve and you shoud to thay make me hape who baot you. a.L

Anonymous said...

holding hands can be lot's of fun while doing stunt's

Anonymous said...

And the dad is holding the little girl.Andthe little boy is in the middle of the family.

Amitch said...

L.L.
Brilliant word choice. Wow, I am impressed with that, especially "trustworthiness."
Ms. Mitchell

Anonymous said...

rey I LIKE YOUR POEM




JM

Anonymous said...

i love your comment allen by livia.l

Anonymous said...

thank you ms.sanders.

Anonymous said...

Running and walking around the field it,s great to have a nice family time together. NG

Anonymous said...

they are kind,nice,wonderful

Anonymous said...

i like your poem livia rey

Anonymous said...

Your comments are nice.%3

Anonymous said...

famly is good
a big happe famly
my famly is amazing
l love my famly
your famly is amazing to.Jt

Anonymous said...

famly is in potit.
a famly is peoply that are rely seshl to you.
ms.mitchl is rely a potint to me.
love yrou famly.
you are speshl to yrou famly.

love c.m.

Anonymous said...

i like evey ones allan chigo

Anonymous said...

i love yrou powom

j.a.