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Thursday, September 15, 2011

15 Words or Less Poetry Fridays

Write a 15 Words or Less Poetry. Make as many as you like. Respond to two other writers.

46 comments:

Amitch said...

Top of the World
So many places to see
So many miles to go
Ms. Mitchell

Amitch said...

Jump into the world
without looking down
Enjoy the ride

Ms. Mitchell

Amitch said...

Blue and green swirl
below me
Can't wait for the moment

Ms. Mitchell

Anonymous said...

fun laughs happy world in
a waterplanet! jump into the
water!,happy friendly times.tt.

Anonymous said...

theres a guy sliding down the slide and the water park is really big people are having fun.cameron

Anonymous said...

the man is on the slide
the man is having fun
the man is happy



andrew jimenez

Anonymous said...

BLUE AND GREEN SRIWL BELOW ME I WILL HAVE FUN THERE TOO.






J.A.M.

Anonymous said...

Having great times,
drinking a drink that swirls into
your tastebuds mouth! enjoy the
view!

Anonymous said...

they look like they are having fun at that wonderful place
mt

Anonymous said...

theer
was a gost. he thro rocks at cars. c.a.

Anonymous said...

when I get on a water slide I GIVE a push and start to glide ja.

Anonymous said...

I love those moments too! TT to
ms mitchell!

Anonymous said...

FAMLY COMES FRST JT
ANE THANG FORE FAMLY
MY FAMLY IS GOOD
LOVE MY FAMLY A LOT
YOU HAVE A GOOD FAMLE

Anonymous said...

that girl is haveing a lots of fun
shes sokeing wet
the sun is shineing bright
RH

Amitch said...

T.T, You are a natural poet. Keep posting.
Ms. Mitchell

Amitch said...

J.T. "Family first" is amazing. Great word choice!
Ms. Mitchell

Amitch said...

A.J. Very to the point. Post more emotions.
Ms. Mitchell

Anonymous said...

they are haveing fun there at the water they like the water they like the water and the sky they love where they live he love to silde in the wet i like being wet by livia.l

Anonymous said...

that was a good one to jt

Anonymous said...

when you ride a waterslide it is very fun it takes about 14 seconds and you are done

Anonymous said...

BLUE AND GREEN SRIWL BELOW ME I WILL HAVE FUN THERE TOO.






J.A.M.

Anonymous said...

The view is joy! everyone deserves
joy,the view is like you can see the Earth. TT.

Anonymous said...

slitrbon it look like fun ithey it look like fun

Anonymous said...

They are having fun.And their at the water park.Fun happy glad super happy.When babies go to the water park they start sceaming.Even when they slid they sceam like dogs barking.And to see the wolds places.

Anonymous said...

I like yours liva

Anonymous said...

I LIKE EVERYONES POEM RM

Amitch said...

L.L. I enjoyed this line " the sky they love."
Ms. Mitchell

Anonymous said...

A world with the happeist moment.
When its night the world
collides. TT.

Anonymous said...

Having fun at a watarpark playing and sliding in the water
in an nise hot day in the summer break. NG

Anonymous said...

I like your poems ms.michelle

Amitch said...

T.T. "everyone deserves joy" is amazing.
Ms. Mitchell

Anonymous said...

good rimeing johonathon.

Anonymous said...

MS.MITCHELL I LIKE YOUR POEM RH

Anonymous said...

great poem Livia . NG

Anonymous said...

ms.mitchell your peom ryms and you made ryming.

Anonymous said...

ms.mitchell your peom ryms and you made ryming.

Anonymous said...

i love your poem tt it is intersin than by livia.l

Anonymous said...

i like it .tt Arianna

Anonymous said...

ms.mitchell your words rym and I like your peom.DL.

Anonymous said...

love the words Thanh great poem NG

Anonymous said...

I like your cameron

Anonymous said...

thank you ng love your friend livia.l

Anonymous said...

ms.mitchell polm is gret. allan. chigo

Anonymous said...

A plashe fun plase were you cant run but you can be in the sun and you can eat a hotdog in a bun and i
got a aun dun bun.

Anonymous said...

last won wos c.m.

Anonymous said...

I like yours ms.mitchell