Friday, February 19, 2010
Writing Goals and Ideas
HELLLLLLLOOOOOO Campers!! Today I would like for you to write goals and ideas for Camp Write-A-Lotta!!
POSTING:
My three goals for Camp Write-A-Lotta are write alot,be a good writer,and have fun.
S.Z.
My goals is to thing fo the soge werith-a-loto c.a.r
I would like to be the best writer in 4th grade by doing
snapshots,ba da booms,ba da bings,and show not telland of course indent.F.P
My goals in writing are to do better hand writing.I will try to get to a levle 4 in my writing.Some of my writing topics are my brother geting heart surgery,Freo River,and going to Chicago.K.E.B
Friday, January 15, 2010
Ba Da Boom or Ba Da Bing
Before:It was very cold out side and so was I.
After:My teeth where chatering I couldent feel my fingers
K.E.B
I WAS SAW ITSIDED AS I WALKED TO THE LIVING ROOM I PICKED ONE UP
As I opened my eyes it was pitch black.As the burst of cold air hit me I shivered
BEFOR I WALKED IN THE LIVIING ROOM I SAW THE PRASENT'S
AFTER I WAS SAW ITSIDED AS I WALIKED TO THE LIVEING ROOM I SAW ALL YHE PRASENT I PICKED ONE UP
K.M.B.
Before:I didn't even eat my macaroni and cheese.
After:As I was walking into the kitchen I didn't even eat my macaroni and chesse.
M.L.
Before:I went outside in the frontyard to play with the snow.
After:As I turned around BOOM my cousin threw a snowball at me.
Before:we went n a cool roller coster
After:we went up and down and around and around
Wednesday, January 13, 2010
What would you bring?
I would bring corn seed because corn can feed you and the hucsk can be use as bandge aid and we can eat it,it could make your skin smooth and it can heal your skin.
m.l
n.l.
i think you shoud breng a metel stove
k.m.b.
I would bring a stove cuse you can use the axe to bild a bench.
I wod chos the stof becasus you can cou on it.c.a.r
i wode take the stove becuse i can cook on it
k.m.b.
I would bring a stove because I could cook food and boil water.F.P
I would bring the stove because you can cook corn on them and they take up less space,and the bench all we do is sit on them.
m.l.
n.l.
My gruop would bring flower that way you could make metason if you get sick M.A.L B.C T.P C.A.R
Tuesday, January 12, 2010
Monday, January 11, 2010
Lone Star Math Problem Solving
A Writing Piece
Pick a piece of writing from your writer's notebook that has lots of emotions in it. If you cannot find a piece with emotion, add the emotion to your piece of choice. Think about Show, Not Tells, colors, Ba Da Bings, and Snapshots to bring your piece to life. Make the reader feels as if he or she is walking in your shoes.