15 Words or Less Poetry Week of October 27

15 Words or Less: Week of October 20

Poetry of Week October 14

at home sleeping
then hear BOOM !
then you hear ZZZZZZZZZZ!
then look outside
by M.G.H


Blast of light fill the night.But on the ground sleep
is sound .Fire comes

Boom!Lights appear in the blue night sky.Fear has
start.Water falls puddles start.

I see the lightning coming down from the shy and
it sound like my heart.
By H.E.A

I saw the sun shining brighter then the blazing
desert sky,but then I fainted
By A.A.A

the weather angry as a
lion,sand whispering telling
you to go away
By M.R.C

the lighting bluer than the sky but it is to our life
the harmful beauty

Thunder crackles lighting strikes darkness
destruction wind 50 miles per hour screms the
world is ending.
By M.K.L

Lightning aiming earth
tragedy in the night skywindy breezes
rushful water
coming to us.
By M.A.P

strike the big light of the fireball hit the ocean
water ever thing is now in the shovel badness.
By E.A.H

Lightning is coming runaway no stay.I will show
you the true beauty of lightning. wate I see but the
lightning will not shock you and me.Because we are
going on a long
By C.L.R

Read Our First Poems on a Blog

Holding handswarming heart,
deep love
mother, son
small momentsmaking memories
by CAM

dust in my toes
holding hand memories coming
back to them having the best time

Sunset rising back to Earth
Waves coming to shore
Filling free from all around me.
by HEM

warm sand
between my toes
warm sun
glazing on my skin
and a beautiful sunset
by MGH

look at me I am child how just rised I feel like a
little free one.
by EAH

a deep sea,
sea shells chatting,
mother loving her child,
hermit crabs clapping their hands
by MRC

wide open range nothing between us
in the sunset on the beach sandby
BY RFL

holding hands warms the sun
and also the yellow and red sand brings back old memories
of when I was a boy
by CLR

Holding hands
the love
the water is beautiful
between my toes
sand on my feet
by AP

the sunset is like a sign
of love with the red color of a heart
say love your one.
by EAH

A mothers long life.She shares her mothers love
with her son.Her hert shines.
byJMC

I see the sunlight before my eyes and feel water
between my toes and see.
By HEA

Warm hands,big heart,cockroaches in my stomach,
By AAA

15 Words or Less Poetry: Storms

Let's think about storms we have been experienced in our lives. Right now, Hurricane Ike really stands out for me. What about you?

I am a bit terrified of lightning storms. They can be awesome and amazing as well.

Write a poem with 15 words or less. Write as many as you like. Remember the beauty of poetry...it's always right! Enjoy!

Click on COMMENTS, write your poem, and sign it with your three initials.

Welcome to Blogging Fourth Graders!

Laura Purdie Salas is one of my favorite bloggers. She encourages bloggers to write poetry each week at her site. We are going to do our own poetry similar to her blog here. Thanks, Laura for an incredible idea!

15 Words or Less Poetry! View the picture above. Write a poem that has 15 words or less.

What do you see? What words spark deep in your soul? What don't you see? Express it words! Let your classmates peek into your mind with poetry.

Click on COMMENTS, write your poem, and sign it with your three initials.