Write Your Personal Narrative

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Ba Da Boom or Ba Da Bing

Before:It was very cold out side and so was I.

After:My teeth where chatering I couldent feel my fingers
K.E.B

I WAS SAW ITSIDED AS I WALKED TO THE LIVING ROOM I PICKED ONE UP


As I opened my eyes it was pitch black.As the burst of cold air hit me I shivered

BEFOR I WALKED IN THE LIVIING ROOM I SAW THE PRASENT'S

AFTER I WAS SAW ITSIDED AS I WALIKED TO THE LIVEING ROOM I SAW ALL YHE PRASENT I PICKED ONE UP
K.M.B.

Before:I didn't even eat my macaroni and cheese.
After:As I was walking into the kitchen I didn't even eat my macaroni and chesse.

M.L.
Before:I went outside in the frontyard to play with the snow.
After:As I turned around BOOM my cousin threw a snowball at me.


Before:we went n a cool roller coster

After:we went up and down and around and around

A Writing Piece

Pick a piece of writing from your writer's notebook that has lots of emotions in it. If you cannot find a piece with emotion, add the emotion to your piece of choice. Think about Show, Not Tells, colors, Ba Da Bings, and Snapshots to bring your piece to life. Make the reader feels as if he or she is walking in your shoes.

Reflection on Camp Write A-Lotta

What did you like best about Camp Write A Lotta? What do you think we should do again next year? What do you think we should do more? What should we NOT do next year?

I THINK THE SLIDESHOW IS WORTH STAYING UP you need to do it angin Ms.Mictell we love it .it made our day eh

The thing i liked the most about camp was sining the songs and to wirte a lot so we well be ready for the tax test next week.BY M.K.L

i like how we could go in the tents,bring are sleeping bags, and read to different peaple.i think that next year the 4 graders should do it to. what i don't think they should do next year is bring big tents.

I liked the allagator game(I`m having trouble with speling)and I think the school shoul keep the tents,marshmellows,and hotdogs.M.C.

i like how we could go in the tents,bring are sleeping bags, and read to different peaple.i think that next year the 4 graders should do it to. what i don't think they should do next year is bring big tents.

my favorit thing was going to the cafaterea and reading to ather peapole.but my moste favorit is waching the video.that was awsome!C.A.C

I like when we put up are tents and worked together to make our writing grate.R.F.L.

The thing I liked the most about camp was sining the songs and to write a lot so we are ready for the tax test next week.Also I think you should`t change anything next time.BY M.K.L

my favaort thing is the viedio in the tentc.a.h

I like when we put up are tents and worked together to make our writing grate.R.F.L.

my favorite parts of camp write-a-lotta is to go in tents,bringing sleeping bags,and giving back feedback to other people.I think you don't have to change anything.by M.R.C.

I like when we got to bring are sleeping bag and I want more time to write soI can get done but bring small tents.H.E.A.

I like when we put up are tents and worked together to make our writing grate.R.F.L

I say you should do less games next year.I say the ending of Camp Write alotta was the best, we should do more of the ending.I say we should not share are writing at the end.J.M.C

i loved the SLIDE SHOOW THE MOST IT WAS AOWSOM SEING EVRY BODY WRITINGN.M.M

I liked every thing you shudint chang a thing. But I love geting to go in to the tents and writing by clr

It was very nice at Camp Write-A-Lotta. My favorite thing was each begining of camp, when we sing. May be you could do a fun activity outside for next year. But also you should be doing more writing, so that you wouldn't need to keep writing in the last day of the Camp Write-A-Lotta. But maybe don't have alot of tents.By:M.A.P.

i like when we put up the tents and worked together to make are writing good.R.F.L.

What are Your Writing Goals for Camp Write-A-Lotta?

My goal is to make the reder jump in my shows and to have golden words. n.m.m

My goal for Camp Write-A-Lotta is to be learning new things and be better at writing. By:M.A.P

My goal is to write better snapshots. J.M.C

I want to work on my wow word to make my peacs better. eh

I want to make a fiction book .I also want to get a 4 on the writen comption. M.C.

my goal for camp isto make the redr walk in my shoes by desribing the place n.m.m

my goal for camp right-a-lota.Is to have beter leads.And snap shots. by clr

the golden saint writers my goal from camp is making people feel like theri are and the stories and bata beanc . a.h

my goal is to get beter with my bata bings,snapshots,wow words,cachy leads,and so on. C.A.C

My goal is to take breath taking snapshots and lots of bada-bings and focus. AP

My goals for Camp Write-A-Lotta are to use amazing snapshots,also to use a buch of ba da bings. My other goals for camp are to have a lot of decirption.BY M.K.L

The golden saint writers: My goal for camp is making people feel like they are ion my story and ba da bings c.a.h

my goals is to make sure my writing improves by using ba da bings, snapshots,wow words and catchy leads. mgh

My goal is to work on my Ba-da-Bings. H.E.M

I want to make a fiction book .I also want to get a 4 on the writen comption. M.C.

My goal for camp is to wite neater and get a 4 on the taks. R.F.L.

I want to make a fiction book .I also want to get a 4 on the writen comption. M.C

My goal is to be come a better writer and get good snap shot. H.E.A.

My goal is to add Ba-Da-Bings,snapshots,using colors,cacthingleads,wow words,show are feelings,and stong voices. M.R.C
My goal is to make the best write camp writing. x.b.m