Before:It was very cold out side and so was I.
After:My teeth where chatering I couldent feel my fingers
K.E.B
I WAS SAW ITSIDED AS I WALKED TO THE LIVING ROOM I PICKED ONE UP
As I opened my eyes it was pitch black.As the burst of cold air hit me I shivered
BEFOR I WALKED IN THE LIVIING ROOM I SAW THE PRASENT'S
AFTER I WAS SAW ITSIDED AS I WALIKED TO THE LIVEING ROOM I SAW ALL YHE PRASENT I PICKED ONE UP
K.M.B.
Before:I didn't even eat my macaroni and cheese.
After:As I was walking into the kitchen I didn't even eat my macaroni and chesse.
M.L.
Before:I went outside in the frontyard to play with the snow.
After:As I turned around BOOM my cousin threw a snowball at me.
Before:we went n a cool roller coster
After:we went up and down and around and around
